May 3, 2008

Eyes

You didnt say a word.
Your eyes revealed it all.
The day i got lost in those beautiful eyes,
I knew i was in love....
Those eyes conveyed a lot.
I saw through your eyes,
And i wondered,
Who was lost in whose eyes.
The caring they showed,
The love they showered,
The affection they gave,
I was blessed.
You didnt have to speak a word.
I didnt have to ask a thing.
The eyes just said it all.
Your eyes mesmerize me,
As i fall deeper into them,
I feel like heaven.
And all i can see is Love.

14 said...:

Anonymous said...

Awesome

Anonymous said...

Lovly post dear but its a was part and she is past tense now if i am right.
so come in to present and try to see the world and heaven through
someone else eyes.
take care
miss anonymous

Dee wana said...

aankhon main teri ajab si ajab si adaayen hai!!
nice post.. :)

annie said...

nice one..
"You didnt have to speak a word.
I didnt have to ask a thing"

Loved this .. :)

Anonymous said...

Silence more Eloquent than sound, but can mislead...


i dont agree with you...


@ miss anonymous

asking to comprmise?

ask him to deicide what he exaclty wants and confirm with her if still there is any chance...

Anonymous said...

Can sombody try this in hindi like this(if found interesting)...Its worth making a song...

tune kuch kaha nahi,
Teri ankhone bol diya,
Vo din/pal jab teri ankhon me kho gaya tha, path tha mai kahi ko gaya, patha tha mereko pyaar go gaya,
Teri ankhon ne sara kuch bol diya, My teri abkhon se dekha,...

AJ said...

Anyone game for the remaining lines??
I will give you ur share. Promise! :)

Anonymous said...

Hey i can complete other lines as well but i dont have time...

Infact i am crying now( A chilled beer can couldnt reduce my pain ...Hey i am not a drinker, but sometimes when i am out of mood i go for it)as something similar happened to me...

Anonymous said...

Hey Anonymous dear,
Somthing in life will never return like past and somthing will never change like truth.So,sometimes in life you have only one option to accept life as it comes to you bocz
you can't stop life and live the life for your love ones even if you are steady life goes.........
hey..only he can deicide what he exaclty wants and confirm with her as he wish..its not like compromise if you accept the truth.Why you people give pain to yourself for some rude persons who left you.
finally a good Hindi version.
miss anonymous

Anonymous said...

Hey dear miss anonymous,

why do you think people are Rude???????


No body is born rude...As far as i know, no relationship starts with something called rudeness,its misunderstandings , lies and what ever make them act as rude...and if the trust is broken with lies anybody will act as rude...

"its not like compromise if you accept the truth"

i didnt understand this..Everybody has to accept the truth, but what if the person on other side is lying ???there may be several factors why he/she lies and acts rude, but that doesnt mean that they dont have love...

As far as i know pain comes from misunderstanding and love is always a sweet feeling....

When we sit and talk and the misunderstading goes off, there will be only love and affection (Need not be beyond that)...

There is only one truth, if you have loved, yes its love and truth, but sometimes other things overshadows love ...Also there is no question of love getting failed as per me...


Pain comes when you dont share your opinon and feelings on others clearly( that may of months and years )....

Even today i can see my monkey dearest eyes looking for me no matter how much misunderstanding happened between us...


I think i need to go for a beer today also, when ever i hear the word misunderstanding and rude, ...

Koyi hai kya baaki lines fill karne ke liye????

i will put other lines also on monday if it were not put...

Anonymous said...

Anonymous dear,
Sorry if i hurt you.i never want to hurt anyone and at this time i am totally agree with you except the beer one part bcoz this is not the right way to deal with pain.
Have a nice day.
miss anonymous

Anonymous said...

@ miss anonymous

Somebody/something in my life has hurt me so much that it stopped hurting anymore for these type of things...

And the beer thing there is big story behind that...But its one lovely thing that promises to be there with me for ever in any situation...
Anyways thanks for the advice...

So don’t worry it didn’t hurt me…
Take care

I guess we are going out of the context, so i made it short...

Anand said...

Thats just way too good yaar!! That just felt way too good while reading. Really fantastic stuff!!

Ashish said...

Intellectual War of Anonymous people is better than the posts here!